The War Cabinet
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(12-13-2012, 09:43 AM)Leanne Wrote:  yeah, it's Babycham with a c, I just had to look it up... I always think of the band, so it gets an s :p

i before e except if you're weird... Hi Keith!
funny I've always written wierd
the vestle with the pestle is the brew that is true
the flagon with the dragon is the brew that is not
now which way round was itSmile

Cham69 your age is showing

(12-13-2012, 09:28 AM)benthejack Wrote:  That was a lot of fun to read.
nailed the tone for sure.

Only small comment is the rhyming in the last stanza came out like diarrhoea... all splooshy and loose with a be, two me's, and a guarantee!

Thanks, loved it!
Them betwomes have had a slurry filter applied

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Messages In This Thread
The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 08:15 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 08:23 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Todd - 12-13-2012, 08:27 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-13-2012, 09:09 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 09:41 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by benthejack - 12-13-2012, 09:28 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 09:43 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 10:36 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-13-2012, 12:26 PM
RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-14-2012, 10:48 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-15-2012, 07:59 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by davidbenjamindix - 12-19-2012, 07:12 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-19-2012, 11:08 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by arbil_poieo - 01-07-2013, 10:29 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Arriedo - 01-07-2013, 12:02 PM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 01-09-2013, 09:25 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by newsclippings - 01-09-2013, 05:46 PM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 01-10-2013, 08:54 AM



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