12-13-2012, 10:17 AM
It's like taking a piss,
blocked [ind] up [ind] pushing.
Let it all go.
Pinch one out,
like wild geese's farting noises,
or just bob there pathetically
like
a quail's funny knob.
Congealing from mind's vacancy,
a smeary glob
changing clarity.
Stop pushing, PUSH HARDER DAMNIT
No need, Just cry your whiny heartbreak tears
and be done with it
pansy boy
they're all the same.
Damnit I just
[ind] squeezed one out again.
Not particularly surreal in the end, but the cues were taken from:
Lianne's Writing from the heart thread
the ---'s in this poem would have been extra spaces but the forum strips extra spaces
blocked [ind] up [ind] pushing.
Let it all go.
Pinch one out,
like wild geese's farting noises,
or just bob there pathetically
like
a quail's funny knob.
Congealing from mind's vacancy,
a smeary glob
changing clarity.
Stop pushing, PUSH HARDER DAMNIT
No need, Just cry your whiny heartbreak tears
and be done with it
pansy boy
they're all the same.
Damnit I just
[ind] squeezed one out again.
Not particularly surreal in the end, but the cues were taken from:
Lianne's Writing from the heart thread
the ---'s in this poem would have been extra spaces but the forum strips extra spaces
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
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And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
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