The War Cabinet

The War Cabinet

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12-13-2012, 09:28 AM

That was a lot of fun to read.
nailed the tone for sure.

Only small comment is the rhyming in the last stanza came out like diarrhoea... all splooshy and loose with a be, two me's, and a guarantee!

Thanks, loved it!

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And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?

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The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 08:15 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 08:23 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Todd - 12-13-2012, 08:27 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-13-2012, 09:09 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 09:41 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by benthejack - 12-13-2012, 09:28 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 09:43 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 10:36 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-13-2012, 12:26 PM

RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-14-2012, 10:48 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-15-2012, 07:59 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by davidbenjamindix - 12-19-2012, 07:12 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-19-2012, 11:08 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by arbil_poieo - 01-07-2013, 10:29 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Arriedo - 01-07-2013, 12:02 PM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 01-09-2013, 09:25 AM

RE: The War Cabinet - by newsclippings - 01-09-2013, 05:46 PM

RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 01-10-2013, 08:54 AM

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