A curious snippet
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(12-11-2012, 09:25 AM)billy Wrote:  no critique unless asked for in the for fun forum Wink :0

tomh, i think you have a sick mind.
Billy I know this is posted in Fun but could you correct my spelling and offer a suggestion for the last line please. Thanks TOMH.Smile

PS hope the sick mind edit works

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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A curious snippet - by Keith - 12-11-2012, 08:05 AM
RE: A curious snippet - by benthejack - 12-11-2012, 09:18 AM
RE: A curious snippet - by billy - 12-11-2012, 09:25 AM
RE: A curious snippet - by Keith - 12-11-2012, 09:46 AM
RE: A curious snippet - by billy - 12-11-2012, 10:06 AM
RE: A curious snippet - by Keith - 12-11-2012, 06:38 PM
RE: A curious snippet - by billy - 12-12-2012, 07:59 AM



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