12-11-2012, 09:46 AM
(12-11-2012, 09:25 AM)billy Wrote: no critique unless asked for in the for fun forumBilly I know this is posted in Fun but could you correct my spelling and offer a suggestion for the last line please. Thanks TOMH.:0
tomh, i think you have a sick mind.

PS hope the sick mind edit works
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out


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