12-09-2012, 05:36 PM
i think it carries a lot more clout after the edit. there is one line
there's nothing left in this town.
i suggested using there's at the beginning but after a re read i may have been wrong. other that a good edit.
i would however suggest another look at the grammar
there's nothing left in this town.
i suggested using there's at the beginning but after a re read i may have been wrong. other that a good edit.
i would however suggest another look at the grammar
