Haiku
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if you wos propa japanese would be thinking about seppuku right now lol

i dont think is a car wreck just the last line needs a bit of a rethink is all <<< erm sez me like its SOOO easy lol

maybe somthing like "blades slicing cold air" Confused
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Haiku - by Keith - 11-19-2012, 08:08 AM
RE: Haiku - by cidermaid - 11-25-2012, 08:22 PM
RE: Haiku - by billy - 11-25-2012, 09:42 PM
RE: Haiku - by TwistedAngel - 12-08-2012, 04:18 AM
RE: Haiku - by Keith - 12-08-2012, 04:51 AM
RE: Haiku - by billy - 12-08-2012, 09:08 AM
RE: Haiku - by TwistedAngel - 12-08-2012, 04:59 AM
RE: Haiku - by Keith - 12-08-2012, 05:10 AM



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