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Behind the Door
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12-07-2012, 11:58 PM
I loved the story and thought the 'panelled, polished oaken door' line scanned really well. The life story of the tree to door was a relaly good idea. I agree with previous comment that a slight change to the final line but keeping the cadence - would enhance it, speaking as one who also loves to repeat things!
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Behind the Door - by Art Deco - 12-05-2012, 11:20 PM
RE: Behind the Door - by cidermaid - 12-07-2012, 05:15 PM
RE: Behind the Door - by Bizzy - 12-07-2012, 11:58 PM
RE: Behind the Door - by Art Deco - 12-16-2012, 10:49 PM
RE: Behind the Door - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-17-2012, 01:15 AM
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