Ionan Seas (or how to put a overpriced guide book to good use)

[billy]

seldom is a poem perfect and it's never perfect for everyone, this is an excellent poem. stick it in a draw for 3 or 4 months and return to it. if it needs any nit fixes you'll have clearer eyes. you've worked really well through the edits from start to finish, i can see where you took advice and made changes using your own words.. you should be very proud of yourself.

thanks for the reads and the work you put into it. ><