void haiku
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Hi,
Fun read thanks for sharing. Particularly liked the second line.
was wondering if could use naught instead of nil, as the meaning of this gives more room for interpretation depth (also keeps the sonic on the last line / word). But this is just my musings and I do like this as it is.
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void haiku - by benthejack - 12-06-2012, 05:58 PM
RE: void haiku - by cidermaid - 12-07-2012, 02:27 AM
RE: void haiku - by billy - 12-07-2012, 07:31 AM



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