12-06-2012, 03:39 PM
Cheers for the feedback TOMH,
Yeah I changed the "a barbers chair", you're right it is redundant.
To move "the blades are pruning vanity" to the start would mess up the composition a bit though, so I just edited line 1
Yeah I changed the "a barbers chair", you're right it is redundant.
To move "the blades are pruning vanity" to the start would mess up the composition a bit though, so I just edited line 1
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
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And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
www.benjack.co.nz