12-06-2012, 09:51 AM
That was really awesome,
I definitely got a strong sense of "wistful but only bit sad from a distant memory".
I don't really understand how you build your poems without overt rhyme, and how you choose your structure. You do it well.
I appreciate the subtlety here, it isn't strongly spoken but perfectly conveys emotive qualities that are difficult to elicit.
Do you have any threads/resources/suggestions a part from reading lots of poetry? (sorry to hijack your thread with a question!)
I definitely got a strong sense of "wistful but only bit sad from a distant memory".
I don't really understand how you build your poems without overt rhyme, and how you choose your structure. You do it well.
I appreciate the subtlety here, it isn't strongly spoken but perfectly conveys emotive qualities that are difficult to elicit.
Do you have any threads/resources/suggestions a part from reading lots of poetry? (sorry to hijack your thread with a question!)
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
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And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
www.benjack.co.nz