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[Pigler]

Hi Pigler,
good poem, and clearly on an important topic. I particularly like the third stanza

My main critique would be the timing feels a little choppy in a few places. this could probably be remedied by removing a few of the connecting words (an example might be: "Signs held up, torches burning flames")

I also can't make sense of the line "it is clear none ever will allot"

Cheers for the poem,
Ben

Hey

I agree on the timing. ''it is clear none ever will allot'' is supposed to represent the fact that no politician or leader will ever give out all or a lot of his wealth to those who truly need it, or give up his massive salary so others can survive the month a little easier