My first poem since I was a teenager.

[TwistedAngel]

hi DoReMi i think for a first poem is pretty good..kinda fell into all the same traps i do as a beginner but honestly listen to that lot ^^^ up there..they'll drag you kicking an screaming (weather you like it or not) down the path of improvement

they even had to learn me to speak propa
not sure if i'd believe billy an say it gets easier..you just get used to it

3rd stanza stood out for me imo it had the best imagery