New user new poem

[gemini]

Hi Bizzy,
I would like to see this properly punctuated. The caps beginning each line don't work, especially when you use commas and semicolons. What I'm saying is, the punctuation does a disservice to the poem. Liked 'heart sore.'
gemini

I have always loved poetry & written quite a few. Friends think they are fine but then they would! Hoping for some constructive ideas on direction, technique etc.

Heart in mouth - here goes ..............

Ending

Don’t look at me that way:
Turn your red-rimmed,
Tear-brimmed,
Eyes to mine;

It was nothing more than
A passing thing,
Brief fling,
Killing time.

Neither one was meant to
Have a heart sore,
Want more,
Love defined

You accuse me of a
Breach of trust,
Just lust,
That’s my crime.

See my guilty verdict
In your red-rimmed
Tear-brimmed
Eyes on mine.