Crayons

Crayons

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12-05-2012, 10:26 AM

just a heads up...this is the for fun forum guys. no critique unless asked for. other than that general feedback is fine.

great little poet tomh the 1st and last line work perfect in tandem with each other and the lines between are good as well.

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Crayons - by Keith - 12-04-2012, 06:52 PM

RE: Crayons - by benthejack - 12-04-2012, 07:42 PM

RE: Crayons - by Keith - 12-05-2012, 07:28 AM

RE: Crayons - by arbil_poieo - 12-05-2012, 01:19 AM

RE: Crayons - by billy - 12-05-2012, 10:26 AM

RE: Crayons - by davidbenjamindix - 12-19-2012, 12:44 AM

RE: Crayons - by benthejack - 12-19-2012, 05:38 AM

RE: Crayons - by Keith - 12-19-2012, 05:42 AM

RE: Crayons - by lavashine - 01-29-2013, 01:40 PM

RE: Crayons - by Keith - 01-30-2013, 04:54 AM

RE: Crayons - by brandontoh - 01-29-2013, 03:39 PM

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