12-05-2012, 08:50 AM
(12-04-2012, 09:56 PM)HenryKyte Wrote: Sinister lips, intoxicated by the scents, like this alotThis left me feeling quite sad my interpretation has changed a couple of times on reading but thats me, I see a fall from grace due to a sexual encounter followed by forgiveness that was never in doubt. A couple of bits above, really enjoyed your poem. TOMH
a brash and sexual crime.
Soaking free and far from firmament,
a passion at her prime.great opening stanza
She lights a purple flame, this confused me, however most things do
Angelica’s saint, shaken from grace.
Clinging tightly to sin-smeared innocence, is sin- needed?
and an everlasting place.
Falling, degradation,
to the core of fervent faith.
Hiding from the bitter winds,
of the Lord’s indignant breath.
Searching for forgiveness,
on tarnished wood grain pews. I like that they are now tarnished it adds weight to the mood
The father keeps her warm at night,
many nights outweigh the few.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out


great opening stanza