Blobfish
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Thank you so much for your feedback, and Todd, I agree with you on the last part. Resigned is a very good, fitting word. I tried changing it to: "Resigned, but wishing I for once could see" and I think I like that version better than the first ^^
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Blobfish - by kamirakara - 12-03-2012, 03:19 AM
RE: Blobfish - by Keith - 12-03-2012, 04:42 AM
RE: Blobfish - by arbil_poieo - 12-03-2012, 05:20 AM
RE: Blobfish - by Todd - 12-03-2012, 06:02 AM
RE: Blobfish - by kamirakara - 12-05-2012, 05:41 AM



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