Fisherman's Friend
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I like the last 8 lines very much, though I think "He talks great speak with his fish" would be better.By "those of peer" you mean those his peers?
I like reeling in meals and bold coastal madness.
I make little of this:
These greetings, rough and granulated,
cursing pleasant public phobias by way of nature

and you can have too much sibilance -
Aspects all spell spaciousness
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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Fisherman's Friend - by HenryKyte - 12-02-2012, 04:07 PM
RE: Fisherman's Friend - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 10:44 PM
RE: Fisherman's Friend - by arbil_poieo - 12-03-2012, 05:43 AM
RE: Fisherman's Friend - by penguin - 12-04-2012, 07:07 AM
RE: Fisherman's Friend - by HenryKyte - 12-04-2012, 08:43 PM



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