12-04-2012, 07:07 AM
I like the last 8 lines very much, though I think "He talks great speak with his fish" would be better.By "those of peer" you mean those his peers?
I like reeling in meals and bold coastal madness.
I make little of this:
These greetings, rough and granulated,
cursing pleasant public phobias by way of nature
and you can have too much sibilance -
Aspects all spell spaciousness
I like reeling in meals and bold coastal madness.
I make little of this:
These greetings, rough and granulated,
cursing pleasant public phobias by way of nature
and you can have too much sibilance -
Aspects all spell spaciousness
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.

