Behind a Different Door:
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I read this first last night and was blown away at its impact.
I think it's the naivety of the voice that stuck the hook in, the words were the painful twist.
great poem!
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?

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Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-01-2012, 06:24 PM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 11:22 PM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-02-2012, 07:37 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 05:05 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by Keith - 12-03-2012, 06:20 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-03-2012, 03:24 PM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by benthejack - 12-03-2012, 04:32 PM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-04-2012, 10:37 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by penguin - 12-04-2012, 06:56 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by gemini - 12-05-2012, 10:34 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-05-2012, 10:37 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by xx81510xx - 12-14-2012, 10:05 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-14-2012, 10:18 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by tectak - 12-18-2012, 08:06 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-18-2012, 09:06 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by tectak - 12-18-2012, 09:48 PM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-19-2012, 07:33 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-18-2012, 10:41 AM
RE: Behind a Different Door: - by billy - 12-18-2012, 10:52 AM



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