12-03-2012, 04:42 AM
(12-03-2012, 03:19 AM)kamirakara Wrote: Near the surface I see dolphins grinningA good opening line and I like the balance of the two stanza's, Happy, Sad...... feel beauty, feel ugly..... top ocean,bottom ocean. Nice short piece. Thanks TOMH
Playing, swimming, jumping, spinning
They are beautiful, successful, full of joy
Winning over hearts easily and never coy
And then there is me, pretty as a blobfish can be
Mouth open, lurking in the deep, dark sea
I am content, but I wish I for once could see
A smiling face when somebody looked at me
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out