Ionan Seas (or how to put a overpriced guide book to good use)

[billy]

i see others have covered the bases and i think they make fair comments. it stands out as a well crafted poem even with the things mentioned. the edit helped but i think you still need another. it's good that you're thinking about the poem. as it stands it's on par with some of the better poetry we have on the boards, if i hear you telling how bad a poet are,; they'll be hell to pay