12-02-2012, 11:10 AM
I cannot wait till the second chapter! I love the sorta dry sense of humor and Tyler's sarcasm, just like a typical 15 year old. This definitely held my attention, I'm dying to know who the man is at the cemetery. I definitely like how you have developed the characters so far with Tyler, his crazy eccentric mom, Tyler's friend Ally who seems a little tom-boyish and his in and out father. Looking forward to the rest. Thank you for posting this.