Holding On To The Little Things

[Todd]

I never try to critique too heavily an outburst of love. Their charm and what sells them is their spontaneity. Light suggestions might go like this:

Your smile
Serenity.
Your touch
Hennessy.

Our kissing
so intense.
Loving you
is complete
common sense.

Just keeping the feel of the lines. I like the idea that loving you is complete that that break gives. That's about it from me.