New user new poem

[nothing_good16]

I agree that the line "love defined" should be more explained. But, everything else is fine with me except for the ending. I really enjoyed the poem but thought that either the poem would be a little longer and still ended with the last stanza or that the last stanza would have been completely different. Maybe it's just me but, I think that it kind of leaves the reader hanging. Or it could just be that I like it so much, I wanted more..haha. good job!