Holding On To The Little Things

[billy]

Thanks...and maybe that would work better with the flow.
(Even though this may be the wrong forum for "critique" but, i wouldn't mind it. --or should I just relocate it?)

you can have a more informal crit here if you want, here is where you define the type of feedback you want whereas on the crit boards you have no choice

i'd also suggest removing the is on the last line also, hust to tighten the thing right up.

a really nice short one ng16