Holding On To The Little Things

Holding On To The Little Things

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12-02-2012, 10:14 AM

Not a critique (not the forum for that) just a quick comment: see if you can live without the "is" on Line 5.

It had a light touch and set a nice mood. I liked it.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Holding On To The Little Things - by nothing_good16 - 12-02-2012, 08:54 AM

RE: Holding On To The Little Things - by arbil_poieo - 12-02-2012, 10:06 AM

RE: Holding On To The Little Things - by nothing_good16 - 01-11-2013, 09:00 AM

RE: Holding On To The Little Things - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 10:14 AM

RE: Holding On To The Little Things - by nothing_good16 - 12-02-2012, 10:21 AM

RE: Holding On To The Little Things - by billy - 12-02-2012, 10:50 AM

RE: Holding On To The Little Things - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 10:53 AM

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