12-02-2012, 10:12 AM
I really like these lines:
-"give me a shot and Ill give you a bullet in my brain"
-"so you can litigate my limitations, construct my conversation, contribute to my alienation."
-"and I'll tell you my creativity does not fit on this canvas."
I just generally love the passion that is sensed in this poem. I also like how "you don't want it all" kind of seems like a transition to the second part.
-"give me a shot and Ill give you a bullet in my brain"
-"so you can litigate my limitations, construct my conversation, contribute to my alienation."
-"and I'll tell you my creativity does not fit on this canvas."
I just generally love the passion that is sensed in this poem. I also like how "you don't want it all" kind of seems like a transition to the second part.