In Between Lights

In Between Lights

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12-02-2012, 06:12 AM

Chilling last line of a fine villanelle. I love how you build the internal rage in the poem. Each stanza brings more tension. I like that there are some lines that I know to read sarcastically like the weather forecast.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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In Between Lights - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 06:04 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 06:12 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 06:13 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 06:17 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 06:19 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 06:22 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by arbil_poieo - 12-02-2012, 06:58 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 04:04 PM

RE: In Between Lights - by billy - 12-02-2012, 04:23 PM

RE: In Between Lights - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 04:31 PM

RE: In Between Lights - by billy - 12-02-2012, 04:35 PM

RE: In Between Lights - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 04:36 PM

RE: In Between Lights - by billy - 12-02-2012, 04:38 PM

RE: In Between Lights - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 09:52 PM

RE: In Between Lights - by Keith - 12-03-2012, 04:29 AM

RE: In Between Lights - by pound526 - 12-04-2012, 12:51 AM

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