12-02-2012, 04:15 AM
Thanks for the comments.A lot of people have applauded the sonics and rhythm, hardly anyone understands it! So that's my problem.
I agree about "forges" and replaced it with "raises". I've removed "a" before morning.
I have the opening 2 verses how I want them, really, not the rest, though.
I agree about "forges" and replaced it with "raises". I've removed "a" before morning.
I have the opening 2 verses how I want them, really, not the rest, though.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.