Snowmen

[billy]

The children flew
and snow-hush fell a great line, it's like an image of a white muffler
upon stone
and by a morning good opening stanza, is 'a' needed in this line?

the soft tattoo
of feet on felt
froze
pitter-patter meaning. wasn't sure how to take meaning

He bends and forges who is He?
replicas
in remembrance
of past faces.

Shovels, brushes,
signatures;
dismembered
masterpieces.

i would have liked to have seen more of the snowmen. but other than that i enjoyed it. some good sounds going on in the poem and some good images.

thanks for the read.