12-01-2012, 01:06 AM
No, no it wasn't too overwhelming or too much. I agree with the title, I hadn't noticed it until you mentioned it. Like I told you this is one of my favorites that I've written so this was helpful because I would like to revise it and hopefully make it better. I really appreciate your feedback and comments and everyone else's. I will look over all of it and make some changes that were pointed out. Thank you so much again for going over it.