Salute Me (language warning)

Salute Me (language warning)

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11-30-2012, 03:11 PM

I did a bit of an in-depth critique then looked at where you'd placed this... so since it's for fun I'll just say that it feels like the start of something bigger and I'd love to see it developed further.

It could be worse

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Salute Me (language warning) - by Arriedo - 11-30-2012, 02:34 PM

RE: Salute Me (language warning) - by Leanne - 11-30-2012, 03:11 PM

RE: Salute Me (language warning) - by billy - 11-30-2012, 06:11 PM

RE: Salute Me (language warning) - by arbil_poieo - 12-01-2012, 12:43 AM

RE: Salute Me (language warning) - by Arriedo - 12-01-2012, 06:30 AM

RE: Salute Me (language warning) - by Leanne - 12-01-2012, 06:36 AM

RE: Salute Me (language warning) - by arbil_poieo - 12-01-2012, 06:54 AM

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