I Know This May Sound Selfish--free verse

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I Know This May Sound Selfish--free verse

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11-30-2012, 12:50 PM

(11-30-2012, 12:47 PM)arbil_poieo Wrote: This was a good read! Very intense and I like the cloud nine bits in the beginning and end.

Thanks! Was the flow of it okay? and do you think that there was any weird/awkward diction?

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RE: I Know This May Sound Selfish--free verse - by nothing_good16 - 11-30-2012, 12:50 PM

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