11-30-2012, 06:40 AM
(11-30-2012, 02:58 AM)Arriedo Wrote: We stand incarceratedI didn't put any commas in. I just wondered how you wanted it to look.
afraid to stage a liberation
Instead we stand in suits, time wasted
away on useless debates and
talk of genocide while the poor contemplate suicide
the futures gone away it left a note worded
Did you want the words like "future's" to have the punctuation, and commas and periods in certain places? If so, those are the only real problems.
"I'm off to hide."
So what do we have but the past and the present
no thoughts of tomorrow because tomorrow's lost its presence
So dream to be president
Even dream to set precedents
But when the rebels weapons spent
"rebel's weapon's"
You'll look on these words in reverence
With a broken soul how dare you try to lead a broken country
Death to the false claimers.
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