11-30-2012, 05:10 AM
(11-30-2012, 12:45 AM)penguin Wrote: Sort of a meta-poem, a cautionary tale in the use of metre? It being the dog on the lead. Or am I reading too much into this!So I find it hard to make suggestions as I'm fairly sure that the abrupt changes in metre are deliberate. You should enjoy this site, it's Metric Heaven.I rarely write metrically - It is just a bit of fun, in the Hillaire Belloc style. The changes in metre make a lot more sense when I read it aloud as I can then stress in all the right places.