A Short Walk
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Sort of a meta-poem, a cautionary tale in the use of metre? It being the dog on the lead. Or am I reading too much into this!So I find it hard to make suggestions as I'm fairly sure that the abrupt changes in metre are deliberate. You should enjoy this site, it's Metric Heaven.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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A Short Walk - by Bloggsworth - 11-27-2012, 11:57 PM
RE: A Short Walk - by cidermaid - 11-28-2012, 03:08 AM
RE: A Short Walk - by billy - 11-28-2012, 08:00 AM
RE: A Short Walk - by Bloggsworth - 11-28-2012, 06:57 PM
RE: A Short Walk - by penguin - 11-30-2012, 12:45 AM
RE: A Short Walk - by Bloggsworth - 11-30-2012, 05:10 AM
RE: A Short Walk - by Wildcard - 11-30-2012, 05:27 AM



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