11-29-2012, 03:45 AM
To me (which I'm probably wrong) it means regret. I get an almost regretful tone, like someone spent most of their lives running and it caught up to them with force.
The last stanza didn't seem as strong to me as the rest, it's almost like you had nowhere else to go with it so you ended it quickly with almost like a summary of the whole poem. Other than that I really enjoyed the poem, you have a lot of dark images that drew me in as a reader.
The last stanza didn't seem as strong to me as the rest, it's almost like you had nowhere else to go with it so you ended it quickly with almost like a summary of the whole poem. Other than that I really enjoyed the poem, you have a lot of dark images that drew me in as a reader.