11-28-2012, 09:44 AM
Sorry billy not as keen on the edit, I really like the original and would only go with the 2nd and 4th line change, not sure about concrete twice so soon and the second use of it sounds like its pushed in. This seems to go against opinion so it could jst be that I connected so well with the original. Thanks TOMH
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