A four stanza pantoum; Bun in t'oven.
#8
(11-25-2012, 05:38 PM)billy Wrote:  I popped my cork the other day;
A flash of thigh. A rip of white
a cherry plucked and all was red.
We banged like shutters in the wind. This is a great line Blush

A flash of thigh, a rip of white
with rabid moans I parted hair.
We banged, like shutters in the wind
the smell of matrimony bare.

With rabid moans I parted hair;
we shredded clothes, and did the deed.
The smell of matrimony bare.
she'd hooked me with her rabbit's noose

We, shredded clothes and did the deed
her father's shotgun testement.
She'd hooked me with her rabbit's noose
my drinking days are numerous.
Not quite sure I understand what it going on with pantoun but I did enjoy the fun inside the lines, thanks TOMH
Reply


Messages In This Thread
A four stanza pantoum; Bun in t'oven. - by billy - 11-25-2012, 05:38 PM
RE: A four stanza pantoum; Bun in t'oven. - by Keith - 11-27-2012, 08:31 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!