Smoggy Sunrise Over Tower Blocks

[Keith]

I think I saw the sun today; a peek
as carbon clouds redacted rays cant get redacted googled it an all so probably just cant see itnot hidden by the concrete fence
pointedly protruding through. The black
of the horizon. Nothing showed;
a glow, a ruddy, bloody sombre show.love the image against the backdrop of the concreteMy partner took her photograph and smiled
I lied, agreed that yes indeed, how right she was,like the rhyme inside the line
the sight of light in such a way
displayed was beautiful. It seemed
to fill a need. Bit of a sharp end but balances I lied, I was left wondering why ? so maybe it works

Thanks for the read billy I enjoyed ? no repected the feeling it generates, I refer to the uncaring exchange and dismissal of opinion you make it work well with description and opinion of the vista, quite delecate really. Nicley done, I would only tweek second line hope some of this makes sense. TOMH