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Immortal Ego

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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11-25-2012, 02:46 PM

i liked this one a lot and have no nits.
the first stanza says it all and the next
is the 2nd coming. the rest ties it up
like a Christmas present.

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Immortal Ego - by Leanne - 11-25-2012, 10:45 AM

RE: Immortal Ego - by Todd - 11-25-2012, 11:24 AM

RE: Immortal Ego - by billy - 11-25-2012, 02:46 PM

RE: Immortal Ego - by Black Jade - 11-29-2012, 10:32 AM

RE: Immortal Ego - by Leanne - 11-29-2012, 02:46 PM

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