A luc Bat

[billy]

Ok, thanks Billy..need to go back and do some re-counting by the sounds of it. (fingers work best for me...and if I run out I can always use my crayons)

Ps this poem doesn't do anything for me...I wrote it just as an experiment and for the exercise of trying something new. I think it is boring...the good news is I'm totally unattached to any part of this one, so it is posted with a full non stroppy guarentee. Thought if I was going to get a grip and get over it, I should set the emotion pistol at it's lowest setting to get started.

it's better than many could do, some of my first attempts at new forms were abysmal, so were some of my latter attempts i think they're definitely a worthwhile endeavour, i'm going to try one myself tomorrow. (thanks for the push)