11-24-2012, 04:44 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..you cant end like that !!!!! thats NOT an end...damn you lol
wot happened at his dads funeral ??? did she find him at his flat ??? did he explore those feelings ???
your end sucked an left me wanting a lot more to this
hmm..so i guess thats a good thing right
a few descriptive references i didnt understand but not enough to distract from a brilliant read
wot happened at his dads funeral ??? did she find him at his flat ??? did he explore those feelings ???
your end sucked an left me wanting a lot more to this
hmm..so i guess thats a good thing right

a few descriptive references i didnt understand but not enough to distract from a brilliant read

