Everything changes
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I appreciate the advice, especially when it comes to grammar. I am used to writing informally on social media sites and never listened too much in school haha. Thanks again for your time and opinion

B

I also like your suggestion for "in a hugging mime." Works much better and is what I was trying to say.

Also keep in mind I'm from Canada, so we have a lot of American influence. Favorite is the correct spelling in America and that's often how I see it written.
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Everything changes - by bunknown - 11-24-2012, 02:39 AM
RE: Everything changes - by cidermaid - 11-24-2012, 04:04 AM
RE: Everything changes - by bunknown - 11-24-2012, 04:40 AM
RE: Everything changes - by cidermaid - 11-24-2012, 06:07 AM
RE: Everything changes - by Leanne - 11-24-2012, 06:09 AM
RE: Everything changes - by billy - 11-24-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: Everything changes - by Art Deco - 11-25-2012, 10:22 PM



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