Apocolyptic Acrostic (language)‏
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cheers guys Smile an will have a rethink about the "Demonic scythe wielder" line cos i think i agree is a bit weak

i wos trying to describe wot death is an can be..its sad its freightening its rips lives apart for not just the dead but those thats left behind...the end is all about not so much a lame apology but more ..tough shit..thers nothing you can do about it..its coming all our way an Mr D dont care who you are

in the meantime i done this for TOMH Big Grin

Your oppressive wieght
Obscures my will
Under disdainful clouds

Break me
Abonish the inner me
Smother me
Take my soul
Aching to be free
Rid meself of you
Die you bastard, just die
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RE: Apocolyptic Acrostic (language)‏ - by Mreds - 11-18-2012, 03:33 AM
RE: Apocolyptic Acrostic (language)‏ - by Keith - 11-19-2012, 07:15 AM
RE: Apocolyptic Acrostic (language)‏ - by TwistedAngel - 11-24-2012, 03:33 AM



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