Mark,
Thanks for the comments, for me cloudless day was referring to genesis where it said mist used to water the Earth. It was ultimately a reference to the flood of Noah. You the cloudless day is You( God) who holds back judgment. That was the strophe I've had to tinker with the most, so any lack of clarity is mine.
Appreciate you reading it.
Oh, and I'll give infinite some thought.
Thanks for the comments, for me cloudless day was referring to genesis where it said mist used to water the Earth. It was ultimately a reference to the flood of Noah. You the cloudless day is You( God) who holds back judgment. That was the strophe I've had to tinker with the most, so any lack of clarity is mine.
Appreciate you reading it.
Oh, and I'll give infinite some thought.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson