Yvonne
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I'd agree that poems can look better without punctuation and certainly punctuation assists understanding. What I'm pointing out is the inconsistency - using punctuation in places and seemingly employing line-ends in order to avoid full stops. Looks to me like the worst of both worlds.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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Yvonne - by Art Deco - 11-20-2012, 12:32 AM
RE: Yvonne - by cidermaid - 11-20-2012, 03:09 AM
RE: Yvonne - by penguin - 11-20-2012, 07:32 AM
RE: Yvonne - by Philatone - 11-20-2012, 11:26 AM
RE: Yvonne - by billy - 11-21-2012, 06:17 PM
RE: Yvonne - by Art Deco - 11-22-2012, 09:19 PM
RE: Yvonne - by penguin - 11-23-2012, 07:17 AM
RE: Yvonne - by billy - 11-23-2012, 07:40 AM



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