Are you a good judge of your poetry

[cidermaid]

Hunger is a breathless dance of teeth—
the smell of bricks—
I stink of it.

See here we go again...I really like that and totally get the wolf / piggy thing.
If you had not mentioned it I would probably have taken it as haveing a deeper under thing going on...perhaps a metaphor for a financial institution.
I'm not sure my brain is wired quite right though