12-22-2009, 10:31 PM
I liked this line
laying down the fake
French accent with knives
and how well you established the poem's tone, describing what should be an elegant setting with off-kilter imagery so it was "funny" from the start
laying down the fake
French accent with knives
and how well you established the poem's tone, describing what should be an elegant setting with off-kilter imagery so it was "funny" from the start
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?