A Moment of Eternity (Rev. 2 Nov '12)
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that comma being removed makes a big difference and the new layout doesn't take anything away from the poem so i'd say good edit Wink
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RE: A Moment of Eternity - by Philatone - 06-16-2012, 06:41 AM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by addy - 06-16-2012, 08:34 AM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by Aish - 06-16-2012, 09:50 AM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by billy - 06-16-2012, 09:14 PM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by heslopian - 06-17-2012, 12:39 PM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by Wildcard - 06-18-2012, 07:11 AM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by Wildcard - 07-02-2012, 04:57 AM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by Leanne - 07-02-2012, 05:26 AM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by billy - 07-02-2012, 11:42 AM
RE: A Moment of Eternity - by addy - 07-02-2012, 04:48 PM
RE: A Moment of Eternity (Rev. 2 Nov '12) - by billy - 11-22-2012, 11:45 AM



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